We got a chance to show our film to our peers. They enjoy watching the short film and they all different opinions about. Not mentioning names, I mostly liked the feedback from 6 of my peers.
Peer 1
Made us aware of the sounds of the film. Some of the sounds were not in sync with the images in parts of the film, especially the high heels and it would be better if some shots didn't have any sounds. He also said constantly hearing the high heels all the way through might seem repetitive.
Peer 2
Liked one shot of the church and night scene. He liked the colour of the shots and encouraged us to experiment with similar shots like that.
Peer 3
Thought that some of the shots were a bit too long and needed to be reduced.
Peer 4
Found it unnecessary to include the shots which were tilted or at a different angle. He seemed to enjoy the static shots better.
Peer 5
Within the film and we included the split screen and some shots were in full screen. Peer 5 found it confusing at times and advised us to either use the split screen or use the full screen.
Peer 6
From all the feedback, I mostly found this one to be influential. Peer 6 did not get the meaning of the film and thought that it was just one character wondering around Sheffield, where as it was two different characters. This made me aware that we had not clearly established that these were two different characters and we needed a way to convey this.
Overall I found the feedback very constructive. And watching the films made by the other groups was very interesting, seeing how they had approached the project at a different angle. The feedback motivated me to try and improve my film.
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