We showed our film to Lee and explained to him what we were try to archive. He told us what was working within the film and what wasn't working. Firstly the bedroom scene wasn't good and didn't seem necessary because it made it obvious where the film was going. By taking it out we wouldn't be giving too much away to the audience and we wanted them to kind of wonder what was going on. He encouraged us to experiment with different locations, colour composition and shots.
I found this feedback very constructive and we took it positively. After the tutorial, I sat down with my colleague and we discussed on the improvements we need to make. We removed the bedroom and scene and looked for more locations to do our filming in.
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